Beautiful Brown Eyes: a haiku

[FUCK THE POLICE]

She has eyes like
Lenses hinged on muscles
Colored with brown pigments









You may see faint traces of the "uber-literalist" style in this haiku.

 

[Lao Tse]

She has eyes like
Lenses hinged on muscles
Colored with brown pigments









You may see faint traces of the "uber-literalist" style in this haiku.

4
6
6

i thought it was 5 7 5 ?

 

[Lao Tse]

sins projected out
your innocence is killed dead
no hope for mankind

 

[FUCK THE POLICE]

4
6
6

i thought it was 5 7 5 ?

I just made up a new kind, I guess.

 

[Cypress]

She has eyes like
Lenses hinged on muscles
Colored with brown pigments

You may see faint traces of the "uber-literalist" style in this haiku.

That was horrible.

 

[FUCK THE POLICE]

That was horrible.

That was the point.

 

[Cypress]

That was the point.

carry on then.

WM, do you mind if I steal this, to read at these little poetry readings I attend? I kinda wonder what it would feel like to be laughed out of the room....

 

[Beefy]

I kinda wonder what it would feel like to be laughed out of the room....

You don't need this poem to do that. Just show 'em your hairdo.

 

[Battleborne]

Critique on waterbaby...........

water is brown
down in the swamp
a young polywog
all covered in slime
waiting a long-long time
to make his mark among mankind
born to the swamp
a new glorious frog
waterbaby is born!

 

[DigitalDave]

water is brown
down in the swamp
a young polywog
all covered in slime
waiting a long-long time
to make his mark among mankind
born to the swamp
a new glorious frog
waterbaby is born!

HAHA, Waterbaby is a frog! Funny!

 

[Waterbaby]

water is brown
down in the swamp
a young polywog
all covered in slime
waiting a long-long time
to make his mark among mankind
born to the swamp
a new glorious frog
waterbaby is born!

Thanks for the attention. It's like a drug to me. Ah.

 

[Battleborne]

Okay ..........

Thanks for the attention. It's like a drug to me. Ah.

Waterbaby
I'm high as a kite
albeit I will never take flight
to soar with eagles is
not my plight
I will be content
to wallow in grime
at least I can say
I had a good time...


anymore request may cost you a dime or two...albeit I do not publish poetry anymore...I found it so boring...but hey if ya like I will send ya a bill... If it makes you feel real!

 

[Lao Tse]

You are the golden child, WM. Just so you know.

 

[DigitalDave]

albeit I do not publish poetry anymore...

Thanks!

 

[Battleborne]

You're.............

Thanks!

welcome because it sucks...except when applied to music lyrics...then it is okay!


and by the way you are not the sharpest tool in the shed...no matter what your little buddies say...they only humor you!

 

[DigitalDave]

welcome because it sucks...except when applied to music lyrics...then it is okay!


and by the way you are not the sharpest tool in the shed...no matter what your little buddies say...they only humor you!

I'm sure there are a few quite sharp in there with me, I'm humble in knowing that. But being funny usually requires someone to laugh other than yourself.

 

[Battleborne]

Whatever.........

I'm sure there are a few quite sharp in there with me, I'm humble in knowing that. But being funny usually requires someone to laugh other than yourself.

go pat yourself on the back somemore...I am not that easily impressed...JR!


and your sophmorish antics are becoming so boring...c'mon Owned is so juvenile and all...!

 

[Battleborne]

One more freebie for the road..........

John McCain

McCain don't be so vain
all us vets feel your pain
Ya lost your wings
shot off by GOP's in vain
Kerry the cherry
gave up his cherry
please Johnny Angel
don't take the angle
all will be well
if ya just get out of hell!

 

[DigitalDave]

go pat yourself on the back somemore...I am not that easily impressed...JR!


and your sophmorish antics are becoming so boring...c'mon Owned is so juvenile and all...!

Don't be mad cause you got owned. Should have just admitted you weren't a good reader and have a terrible time actually making sense, instead ya had to argue with me. It was fun!