Needed: 4th verse.

Beefy

Beefy

Worst gambler ever
I have a song that I kind of like, but I need another verse or two. If I put it up here, will you idiots help me write the rest of it?

For those who don't know me, "idiot" is a term of endearment.

Whaddayasay?
 
That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

Try this one.

I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

I thought I saw you with the mailman.

You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.
 
Desh said:
That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

Try this one.

I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

I thought I saw you with the mailman.

You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.
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fuck yeah shrubbie! I was looking for a mailman angle, but I couldn't get it. This is going in. Lets go for a 5th verse.

Yeah. Beefy. That was pretty damn good. You sound rockstarish. You should go with this.
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You da man Asshat. i mean it.
 
What about:


Where are we
In the absence of god?
What am I?
Please hold me, I am scared!
I don't want to die!
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right
 
Or maybe:

Go seek her out all courteously,
And say I come,
Wind of spices whose song is ever
Epithalamium.
O, hurry over the dark lands
And run upon the sea
For seas and lands shall not divide us
My love and me.
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right
 
I was donating my time at the local school

I thought I saw you the principle.

You were sharpening his pencil and he was teaching you the rules

But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would alway treat me right.
 
Right or wrong
ten inches long
polyester thong
out of control gut busting girth
Devalue of worth
BUt you always said you'd try to treat me right right?
 
Watermark said:
What about:


Where are we
In the absence of god?
What am I?
Please hold me, I am scared!
I don't want to die!
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right
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Jesus.

Watermark said:
Or maybe:

Go seek her out all courteously,
And say I come,
Wind of spices whose song is ever
Epithalamium.
O, hurry over the dark lands
And run upon the sea
For seas and lands shall not divide us
My love and me.
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right
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Seriously, is this emo? I'm too old to know if this is a gag or not.

Anyhow, give me 11 minutes, I just have to rythmize shrubbie's lyrics and I'll have a second version up.
 
Desh said:
That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

Try this one.

I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

I thought I saw you with the mailman.

You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.
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LMAO - Desh that is pretty funny.

Beefy I thought you sound great! You have a great voice, even when you are just talking. The song is pretty catchy.
 
I can't accept the truth I guess
for to do so would be death.
so I look the other way and pretend
and put you on a pedestal, attributing to you moral perfection, in spite of all evidence, merely to protect myself.
I don't why i believe you treat me right.
 
Desh said:
I was donating my time at the local school

I thought I saw you the principle.

You were sharpening his pencil and he was teaching you the rules

But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would alway treat me right.
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Desh you have quite the naughty little mind. Playing professor/student with your husband perhaps?
 
Beefy said:
Jesus.



Seriously, is this emo? I'm too old to know if this is a gag or not.

Anyhow, give me 11 minutes, I just have to rythmize shrubbie's lyrics and I'll have a second version up.
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It amused me to put melodramtic emo lyrics down and then stick a nonsensical "And I knew it wasn't you because you said you'd always treat me right" at the end to pretend to seriously match your pattern.

And the second one is a James Joyce poem.
 
Watermark said:
It amused me to put melodramtic emo lyrics down and then stick a nonsensical "And I knew it wasn't you because you said you'd always treat me right" at the end to pretend to seriously match your pattern.

And the second one is a James Joyce poem.
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Right. You thought it was your best work. admit it.
 
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