Tiana's Emo Poem

[LadyT]

I refer to myself in the 3rd person
I like that thing called narcisism
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
I think my poems are rad...
in reality they are pretty effin sad
its like the mesosphere
kinda but not really clear
My emotardness is like cow dung
this $hit must get flung
I tend to refer to celestial stuff
even when people think, "my god, that's enough"
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
Tiana's Ego poem.....
what do you guys think?

 

[Damocles]

The rhyme and meter were a bit off and there was hardly any mention of celestial globes. Such limited mention of globes tends to make the poem less attractive...

 

[LadyT]

The rhyme and meter were a bit off and there was hardly any mention of celestial globes. Such limited mention of globes tends to make the poem less attractive...

You're right. I should fix that.

 

[Cypress]

I refer to myself in the 1st person
I like that thing called narcisism
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
I think my poems are rad...
in reality they are pretty effin sad
I tend to refer to celestial stuff
even when people think, "my god, that's enough"
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
Tiana's Ego poem.....
what do you guys think?

Horrible. Have another doobie.

 

[LadyT]

The rhyme and meter were a bit off and there was hardly any mention of celestial globes. Such limited mention of globes tends to make the poem less attractive...

The meter isn's supposed to be traditional btw. I'm a non conformist when it comes to my poetry.

 

[Minister of Truth]

LOL

 

[LadyT]

Horrible. Have another doobie.

LOL.

You think? I put my heart and soul into that.

 

[Cypress]

LOL.

You think? I put my heart and soul into that.

It was actually pretty effing funny.

 

[Damocles]

Much better, that second mention of spheres made it one of the best ever.

 

[Minister of Truth]

LOL.

You think? I put my heart and soul into that.

No matter what one may think, the fact remains that it is EMO poetry, and people were driven to drinking. Mission Accomplished.

 

[LadyT]

Much better, that second mention of spheres made it one of the best ever.

.......Tiana tries......Tiana tries....

 

[LadyT]

No matter what one may think, the fact remains that it is EMO poetry, and people were driven to drinking. Mission Accomplished.

Tiana likes to drive people to drink. Its what she does best.

 

[Minister of Truth]

Yes, and Threedee likes to kick back and watch the poor fools suffer through it. Of course, he would be drinking too...

 

[LadyT]

Yes, and Threedee likes to kick back and watch the poor fools suffer through it. Of course, he would be drinking too...

Isn't it fun refering to yourself in the 3rd person?

Tiana is having such a fun friday now.

 

[Minister of Truth]

Threedee thinks this is referring to himself in the 3rd Person. He is pretty sure that is what it is... You can school him if he is wrong.

 

[Damocles]

Isn't it fun refering to yourself in the first person?

Tiana is having such a fun friday now.

Third person. That's third person.

"I" <-First person.
He, she, we <- Second person
They, Proper noun <- third person

 

[LadyT]

Third person. That's third person.

"I" <-First person.
........

I know! I made a mistake. I meant to say 3rd.

But I thought second person was "You"

 

[LadyT]

Threedee thinks this is referring to himself in the 3rd Person. He is pretty sure that is what it is... You can school him if he is wrong.

Threedee is totally correct. Tiana is TOTALLY wrong and meant to say 3rd.

 

[Damocles]

I know! I made a mistake. I meant to say 3rd.

But I thought second person was "You"

You is 2nd person. He, she, it, they, Proper Noun 3rd...

D'oh!

 

[LadyT]

You is 2nd person. He, she, it, they, Proper Noun 3rd...

D'oh!

Dame ocles got owned in my emo thread too!