Tiana's Emo Poem

[Battleborne]

Hummm..............

Tiana biona shes so cool
most in here think she is a fool
no matta' brotha from another motha
cool is no mo than a simple spool
she sings the song
from another long gone era
does she please jpp
only a fool would know
back to the desk without regret
I must say I'm not impressed

 

[Minister of Truth]

Threedee is totally correct. Tiana is TOTALLY wrong and meant to say 3rd.

Wow, Threedee keeps being surprised today by the way LadyT phrases her speech...

 

[FUCK THE POLICE]

I refer to myself in the 3rd person
I like that thing called narcisism
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
I think my poems are rad...
in reality they are pretty effin sad
its like the mesosphere
kinda but not really clear
My emotardness is like cow dung
this $hit must get flung
I tend to refer to celestial stuff
even when people think, "my god, that's enough"
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
Tiana's Ego poem.....
what do you guys think?

I give this attempt at an emo poem 2 stars out of 10. Try better next time.

 

[LadyT]

I give this attempt at an emo poem 2 stars out of 10. Try better next time.

Tiana thinks watermark feels threatened and a tad jealous at the deepedness of her poems.

 

[FUCK THE POLICE]

Tiana thinks watermark feels threatened and a tad jealous at the deepedness of her poems.

We emo's don't talk in third person - it's all about the "I", and how everyone unjustly ignores us, you see.

 

[evince]

I can swim all the way to the bottom of the pool.
which makes me deep and cool
I like my pizza from Chicago.
Even when Im in Fargo.
I like Smoke on the water.
Im a Rock daughter
I have read The Deeper Wound.
Deepka is to suffering tuned.
Im deep as deep my friends.
So wiht that you can kiss my big round end.

 

[evince]

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