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Hemingway wrote stupid sentences. They were short. They were ugly. It looks like he was in a competition with his friend. About who could use the most punctuation. In a single book.
Even trying to write like Hemingway makes me cringe.
Funny. I look at Hemingways writing, and I see a lot of run-on sentences. The man doesn't use commas. Cormac McCarthy pretty much doesn't use comma's either.
The only punctuation Hemingway ever used, basically, was the period. His prose was simple. It wasn't inflated with cliches and bad metaphors in an attempt to patch up his prose with purple.
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